ABOUT MY HAPPY
I) INTRODUCTION
These things make my happy is, when people show nice to me, increasing my happiness.
When people watch the gratitude is a key element for me to be happy in my life.
Sometimes, if I get nice words from my husband.
When, everyone around me.
When I exchange with positives and optimistic people.
At last, when my family takes my news (for me, it's a huge weight).
II) BODY
Changing face,
Changing mind,
Mooving body ( example : sometime, I'm shy. As soon as, my family calls me, my body transform automatically. I'm happy inside of my body),
Feeling young,
I don't worry again.
III) EXAMPLE
I like when my husband takes care of me. My family calls me. When people encourage me when I do something. (If its good).
IV) CONCLUSING
Finally, I thing, if you have a good heart, you thing positively, and you are nie to others, then love will come you way! Because the life, is for sharing and loving.
Hi Mahoua,
ReplyDeleteI commend you on trying to improve your writing and sending in a second version - good for you! You separated your paragraphs - good - but you don't have to number them or label them - ok? If you have any questions please ask me anytime!
Ok. Thanks for everything marcella. This comment give me the power to do more effort next time.
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